Elgrego
Yesterday, Elgrego came to our school and performed magic in an anti-bullying show.
When we were ready, he started the magic show. Our school walked in and Elgrego said, "Alright. Let's start." First, there were three birds in a big box. Elgrego put a blanket over it and said, "It better work. It better work," and snapped his fingers and a rabbit appeared. The whole school was amazed at that trick.
Next, Elgrego performed the raspberry fizzy drink trick. He poured some raspberry fizzy drink into a cup and put it in the ups and downs box. He turned it left then right and upside down
and it did not spill. It blew my mind. "Wow!" I said.
After that, Elgrego was being a ventriloquist. He rushed out with an egg and a little green dinosaur popped out of the yellow and green egg. He got teased like me but he was green and he sang some songs and Elgrego said some poems. He was a ventriloquist. A ventriloquist is someone who talks for puppets.
Finally, Elgrego did the trick of walking through a brick wall. First, he put the blanket over the wall. He stood behind it, then he said, "Aaaaagh! Eeeeeh!" He started to walk through the wall. He took away the blanket and he was standing in front of the wall. He had walked through a solid brick wall.
Mum is so proud of you Rory another fantastic recount. Wow you have made some amazing progress.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Rory. You have begun each paragraph with the main idea of the paragraph - a sentence telling what the paragraph is about.
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