I have been practising use words that give readers pictures in their minds.
Last week we did athletics day.
We went to vortex. The vortex was green. It was the shape of a rugby ball. There were holes in the sides that made the vortex whistle. The tail on the back was the shape of a plane’s wings. When I gave it my best chuck, it sounded like a plane or a jet. When we were practising, Mr K said, “If you hit me, I will give you some chocolate,” but he kept on moving. Nathanael and James were happy when they got their piece of chocolate.
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